It was a code red!!
she had arrived in a mangled state
at first they thought it was a major accident case
they could not see her mangled face
she did not exist
the operation began promptly
human life was divine
Gods were there to protect her
but
they had to give up mid way
a flat line EEG meant her brain had given up
her thoughts ..her thinking power.. was completely shut down
loss of any case
was a severe loss for these life savers
what intrigued them was that when her heart was open
they saw scars of old wound with the new fresh wound
it was as if
the heart had been in pieces earlier too
when they tried to peep into her eyes
to see if something could be saved of the retina
they found small shards of glasses in them
shard of crystal dreams
they knew
it was an open and shut case
she had arrived dead
but her soul had refused to leave
and hence the confusion
she was declared dead clinically
they issued a death certificate for her
Cause of death - systematic failure of thoughts, heart and ....... dreams.
that's a beautiful text as usual, and as you said it reminds us to never give up our dreams ! have a nice day.
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this reminds me to guard my thoughts, heart and dreams. Thanks for the reminder and I hope everyone will do the same.
ReplyDeletegr8 thoughts...life...death...and i would like to hope that after that some kind of rebirth.The kind where the phoenix rises again out of the ashes.Hope is good but then probably u r talking about hope terminated.
ReplyDeleteTouching indeed!!
Painful.....yet lovely. I have no words this time! I am speechless and silent Sush!
ReplyDeleteA very painful piece ... sadly, I believe your words hold truth for some in this life. As always your piece is thought provoking and real. Your writing touches the heart...whether we laugh or cry while reading....we feel....we always feel! Your words are powerful! xo
ReplyDeleteSo beautifully deep!
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful but painful words...I am glad her soul was alive...You are talented
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